Make
Characters Realistic but Not Real
Are
you like me? I think it’s a mistake to base a character too closely
on real people. On the other hand, interesting characters need
realistic “warts.”
In
mysteries and thrillers, the protagonist needs to be capable of
solving problems.
I can’t be the only reader tired of “dizzy” snoops in cozies
who clumsily stumble into police investigations. I also don’t want
to read about another neurotic genius, like Sherlock Holmes or
Hercule Poirot. Let’s face it - most problems are solved by normal
people, albeit sometimes
smarter
or more observant than most.
Sara
Almquist, the lead character in my medical thrillers Coming
Flu
and Ignore
the Pain,
is an epidemiologist. That profession gives her legitimate reasons to
pry into everyone else’s business. She’s normal, but maybe a bit
cranky and perhaps dotty about her dog Bug, who is based closely on
my real Japanese Chin. (Please
note I use “who” not “which” as an adjective to describe
Bug.)
Realistic
characters are amalgams.
The dean of the medical school in my medical mystery Murder:
A New Way to Lose Weight is
a polished, aloof gentleman, but he feels no remorse when he assigns
his associate dean Linda tasks that all but turn her into cannon
fodder. He is a chimera of dozens of deans I’ve observed at the
University of Wisconsin-Madison, where I was a faculty member, and
elsewhere.
Fantasy
characters can be in real locations.
Although I don’t base my characters on real people, some of my
scenes are exactly as I saw them. I climbed over the roof of Iglesia
de San Francisco in La Paz, Bolivia as my heroine Sara does in Ignore
the Pain.
My trek was leisurely; hers wasn’t.
Realistic
characters have emotions and attitudes.
Six percent of the children born in Bolivia die before their fifth
birthday. That statement is fact and lacks emotion.
In
Ignore
the Pain,
I tried to show how my heroine Sara’s beliefs and attitudes changed
as she advised Bolivians on complex, nuanced public health problems.
Although she knows cocaine is dangerous, she understands why miners
in decrepit mines at thirteen thousand feet chew coca leaves after
she visits a mine of PotosÃ, Bolivia. I hope the situations she sees
arouse empathy and other emotions in the readers, as they do in Sara.
Now
it’s your turn. How do you create realistic fictional characters?
Bio:
JL Greger is no longer a
biology professor at the University of Wisconsin-Madison; instead
she’s putting tidbits of science and romance into her medical
thrillers/ mysteries - Ignore
the Pain, Coming
Flu, and Murder:
A New Way to Lose Weight.
She and Bug, her Japanese Chin dog, live in the Southwest. Her
website is at http://www.jlgreger.com.
Her blog JL Greger’s Bugs is at
http://www.jlgregerblog.blogspot.com.
Blurb:
In Ignore the Pain,
Sara Almquist couldn’t say no when invited to be the epidemiologist
on a public health mission to assess children’s health in Bolivia.
Soon someone from her past in New Mexico is chasing her through the
Witches’ Market of La Paz and trying to trap her at the silver
mines of PotosÃ. Unfortunately, she can’t trust her new
colleagues, especially the unsavory but sexy Xave Zack, because any
one of them might be under the control of the coca industry in
Bolivia. And coca is everywhere in Bolivia.
Sara
and Xave will travel to Cuba in a fourth novel, called Malignancy.
Oak Tree Press will be publishing this novel in the fall of 2014.
Amazon
sell links for: Ignore
the Pain
http://amzn.com/1610091310 ,
Coming
Flu
http://amzn.com/1610090985,
and Murder: A New Way to Lose Weight http://amzn.com/1610090624.
Thanks for sharing your advice and letting The Back Deck Blog readers have a chance to get to know you and your work, Janet!
Thanks for sharing your tips! I agree it's important not to make any one character too much like a real person, yet I need to pull in an attitude or trait I've seen in someone and/or can identify with personally to feel they're believable. What magic when a fictional character comes alive!
ReplyDeleteMany times, my characters have traits that people I know possess. They aren't 100% my character, but they sort of smack of the best or most outstanding qualities of those I know. Interesting blog. Well done.
ReplyDeleteEveryone thinks that an author's characters are based on real people. I get that all the time and it's so funny to me... especially when they ask me "Which character is YOU??"
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